angry and not-angry emails of the week, from the same guy
“SUBJECT:
Writer feedbacks: Larry Dobrow
FROM:
XXX
E-MAIL:
XXX
FEEDBACK:
The Boras thing. It didn’t work. Not at all. You claimed to have followed him and had all of this inside info. Two sentences in, I realized it was a bunch of bullshit. Had you written it as This must be what a typical day at the Winter Meetings must be for Boras, it changes everything. Bad job of execution by you and worse by your copy editors for letting it pass the way it is written.
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“SUBJECT:
Writer feedbacks: Larry Dobrow
FROM:
XXX
E-MAIL:
XXX
FEEDBACK:
The Yankee Stadium story. Nice job. That was good stuff. I figure if I criticize, I should also let you know when I like something.
